Hi! I have an essay to the class of Media Ethics and Law, and I need to improve it. I’m attaching the essay with my Professor’s feedback. She said I have zero analysis, obsolete case, unnecessary and unjustifies use od the direct citations of the legal acts. I’d be grateful for your notes with specific ideas on how improve my paper with this topic and used examples.
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